8 years passed away, in oblivion,
Years that went past in silence
Yet the emptiness widenes more.
The comfort and reasons failed
Whenever i tried to run after them ,
Nothing ever replaced your warmth.
I still feel your soothing smile'
You painted my life with happiness
Stopped me from going astray.
I pulled away from thoughts of you,
Aches and pains of your absences,
Which never left my heart in peace.
Let me love you with all my heart,
Everyday of my life and years to come,
As God says, think good, think gratitude.
The mother in me will always cherish
Those lovely moments you bestowed
In return ,condensed all into my daughter.
The smile i get from her compensates,
For the vacuum you have left behind,
She showers me with love of ' you'.
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Another year went past me with out my mother....
I Thank P R Rajan the Artist....for allowing me to use his paintings here with the poem, my deepest gratitude Rajan.
...visualizing the divine love of mother....
Thank you so much Rajan , i am glad you are the first one of comment.Thank you.
Sapna,
Loss and Compensation, both are facts of life. God takes away something but at the same time gives something in return. You summed it up very truely.
Take care
Thanks niceguy.........for the visit and for the honest appreciation.
beautiful...
Thanks sindhu
Sapna
really touching one
I always feel that your words get more intimacy while you writing in English and of course when it is about your own life..
I am sure that rajan is a good painter and kind enough to share his painting for your blog..
but I canot find out any trace of divine meternal love in that picture,I am sorry may be my mistake but I feel that painting strongly exotic..
sorry rajan this is my opinion related to this writing and painting and not at all with your painting as a separate entity
"The smile i get from her compensates,
For the vacuum you have left behind,
She showers me with love of ' you'"
really good words
"Which never left my heat in peace"
is it heat or heart sapna..?
ഈ ജീവന്റെ മറ നീക്കി ഞാനും പോകുമെന്നറിയുക,
അവിടവർ ചേക്കേറും ചില്ലയിലൊരൊരിരുളിട
മെന്നെയും കാത്തിരിപ്പുണ്ടെന്നറിയുക,
സ്വപ്നങ്ങൾക്കെല്ലാമറുതിയാം സ്വപ്നമാമിരുൾപ്പൂവ്
പറിക്കുവാൻ ഇനിയെത്ര ദൂരം?
തിരിച്ചു വരാത്തൊരു ശ്വാസത്തിൻ ദൂരം മാത്രം!
അതൊരറിവു, തിരിച്ചറിവ്,
അറിവുകൾക്കെല്ലാമറുതി,
തിരിച്ചുപോക്കില്ലാ പോക്കിൻ പൊരുൾ.
അവിടെന്റെയുറ്റവർ മുൻഗാമികൾ
തരാതെപോയ ഒരു മുത്തവും വിടരാതെ പോയ ചിരിയുമായ്
മൌനത്തിൻ കരിങ്കച്ചയുടുത്ത്
സ്വപ്നങ്ങളില്ലാ സ്വർഗത്തിൻ വേലിക്കെട്ടിന്നരുകിൽ
എനിക്കായ് കൈകളും നീട്ടി…..
എനിക്കു കൊതിയാവുന്നു
ഇവിടെ മുങ്ങിയവിടെ പൊങ്ങാൻ,
ഇവിടെയുറങ്ങിയവിടെയുണരാൻ.
വിസ്മ്രുതിയിലേക്കൊരു പാത
സമയരഥംവിട്ടൊരു യാത്ര
കാണാത്തൊരു ദൂതന്റെ
നിനച്ചിരിക്കാനേരത്തെ വരവ്
അകന്നു കേട്ടൊടുങ്ങുന്നൊരു മണിനാദം…
മതി, മറ്റൊന്നും വേണ്ട,
വിട.
രജനി....ഇതു വിസ്താരമൊ?? അഭിപ്രായമൊ?? രണ്ടായാലും നന്നായി...മലയാളം എഴുതാന്‍ പഠിച്ചു അല്ലെ??
എല്ലാ വേർപാടും ദുഖമാണു. പക്ഷെ നാളെ പോയവർക്കൊപ്പം ഞാനുമെത്തും എന്നറിയുമ്പൊൽ ആ തീവ്രത അല്പം കുറയും. അത്രയെ ഉദ്ദേശിച്ചുള്ളു.
അ,ആ,ഇ,ഈ ഉ, ഊ.. അതു കഴിഞ്ഞുള്ള അക്ഷരം എങ്ങനെയാണു എഴുതുന്നതു?
നന്ദി രജനി....ഈ പേജില്‍ പോയാല്‍ അക്ഷരമാലയുടെ പേജ് കിട്ടും...
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Wayanadan ,,,ചിത്രകാരന് ഒരു വിരോധവും ഇല്ല. പിന്നെ ഇത്ര നല്ല ആത്മാര്‍ത്ഥതയുള്ള വിമര്‍ശമരുള്ളപ്പോള്‍ എന്റെ കവിതകള്‍ ഇനിയും കൂടുതല്‍ നന്നാവുകയേയുള്ളു. നന്ദി വയനാന്‍,വളരെ നന്ദി.
very touching poem,sapna.i could feel the pain in your heart,u have penned it wonderfully
thanks a lot manoon dreams,you made my day.
nothing is going to oblivion;taking rebirth as our real life.sometimes as a child, a cheer, a food, a dreamm,a patting, a soft word....a poem!
another 8 year for another 80 years.
Hope so Ramanunni.....that it never goes into oblivision
sweet slice of motherhood cooked deliciously , served to all lost sons/dtrs.
thanks for the treat.
here's something you don't like:
1)3rd line: replace widened with present tense(widens) -as you begin with "yet"
2)7th line avoid archaic thy , which is no longer in use.
3)15th line good feel is ok-good is an adj. there's a mismatch of think good, think gratitude in the same line-think is not an adj.
don't ask me "who you are to correct me-a professor?"
lal salam swapna
lal salam
azeez,thanks a lot for the corrections and there is no big small,professor student category for correction,you suggested!!!!to take it or leave it is upto me.Thanks once again.
As ever you have expressed your emotions well, albeit with some typing/grammatical errors which Azeez had pointed out. [and you seem to have taken the advice!]
Dear Anonymous,let me be polite to confess, I fail to contain your goodness:you appreciate swapna's right to express her emotions, while you negate the same right to me?
Or you're Swapna's Guardian Angel or wholesale buyer warning her never to succumb to these sorts?
Or you're a Totalitarian Stalinist making a communication between a poor reader and a writer impossibe?
azeez
Hello....am i invisible here Azeez and Anonymous!!!!!!!!Azeez, thanks for your advice and Anonymous always keeps a distence with us and except to the comments inspite of my repeted requests.... Thanks again for your great words,dear Annoni'....
"You leave us no choice but to
Thankyou here noting but here only,
You'r oceans away or land unknown
Expressions near,close to heart"
Thankyou Annoni and Azeez
There are some people [usually with low self esteem]who react wildly to perceived slights.My words were meant to appreciate Sapna's work [does that make me her guardian angel-wow!]and at the same time make a tongue-in-cheek comment at her past record of not correcting the grammatical or typing errors.
Totalitarian Guardian Angel [TAG]
hello anonymous,no,I should call you my dear friend,
this time you gave a shock to my heart. I repent wo/man. really repent. I feel I overworked my pancreas on a misunderstood, and negligible cause.you may be right:low self-esteem. I was at a loss to value your intention.I swear , I will never do it again;to none.
azeez
azeez
Sapna,
Seems you have withdrawn your support to me. Not seen you in my space for long.
Take care
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