Ever been loved,with heart,
loved and being loved differs.
never knew being loved was,
intense like a wine,cured to,
perfection through years.
Emotions can be depicted,
as love,the most cherished.
Expecting no returns and
giving was love in itself.
was I worth it,ever, to love?
will I give myself away to love?
I never asked for love,instead
wished for an angle to save.
Save me from miseries of life,
cried out loud with all my heart.
one angel who who will protect,
me from all the toils of life.
The angel came with life and love,
so full of life,that it bowled me over.
Taught me new horizons of passion,
love so full,with patience and calm.
Years needs for love to ripe and grow,
patience to cherish sustain love.
loved and being loved differs.
never knew being loved was,
intense like a wine,cured to,
perfection through years.
Emotions can be depicted,
as love,the most cherished.
Expecting no returns and
giving was love in itself.
was I worth it,ever, to love?
will I give myself away to love?
I never asked for love,instead
wished for an angle to save.
Save me from miseries of life,
cried out loud with all my heart.
one angel who who will protect,
me from all the toils of life.
The angel came with life and love,
so full of life,that it bowled me over.
Taught me new horizons of passion,
love so full,with patience and calm.
Years needs for love to ripe and grow,
patience to cherish sustain love.
17 comments:
An instant poem........spur of thinking, momentary thought process,
Love stores patience/hope.
True.
yes, very true hobo
Love endures and transcends time...what a wonderful thing wandering through eternity...
Thanks Kauan gung.... the aches and pains of love are wonderful
lovely.
Thanks Judi~gmaj
a beautiful photo along with the lovely words & the lines...really love is something so beautiful which can only be felt & the feeling eternal...Wonderful!
Thanks for the lovely appreciation.....love can make you or breake you.Today the world is sustained,through different vertions of love.
Thanks for stoping at my world.
lovely thoughts on love .
I liked the pic also .
Thanks a lot Jaya
.... stumbled upon your page, read your spur-of-the-moment 'poem', thought i should leave my comments......
>> will I give myself away to love?
you weren't sure here..........
>> The angel came with life and love,
so full of life,that it bowled me over.
you seem to have succumbed here...............
took the liberty to do a li'l bit of 'editing'. please don't feel offended. just want you to tell me if i read your thoughts well.
Ever been loved,with heart?
loving and being loved differs.
never knew being loved was,
intense like wine,cured to,
perfection through years.
Emotions can be depicted,
as love,the most cherished.
Expecting no returns and
giving, was love in itself.
was it worth it,ever, to love?
will I give myself away to love?
I never asked for love,instead
wished for an angel to save.
Save me from miseries of life,
cried out loud with all my heart
for one angel who will protect,
me from all the toils of life.
The angel came with life and love,
so full of life,that he bowled me over.
Taught me new horizons of passion,
love so full,with patience and calm.
Years needed for love to ripen and grow,
patience to cherish, sustain love.
I have no objection to anyone suggesting or sugesting changes and in fact i welcome them,but you should keep an anonymity to your profile and blog, which we cannot access,when you edit and suggest so that we can read you and improve ourselves.........thanks
please do 'stumble yourself more into my blogs'
Sapna-
Very first time in your blog. I loved this 'instant' poem .. loved these lines...
"was I worth it,ever, to love?
will I give myself away to love?"
and also
"Years needs for love to ripe and grow,
patience to cherish sustain love"
Very True.
Wishes, Sandhya
( can you take out the word verification please? )
Thanks a lot Sandya......though instent,all my poems are life-like'some incident/moment,in life trigger off the poetic stint.
the poem touches in my soul
reaches in the wings of heart
how sweet the words
like a candle in my heart
Thanks a lot Khareem
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